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Falling spinning madness, into the depths, drowning in the deep, beautiful fury, throughout time and space I fly, rolling thunder, flashing light, I come.

Ever knowing, ever not, into the light of the dark, far from the path I stray, mindless madman, wise and knowing, sky fire for friend, far away yet close by, I come.

Burning with fire, cold as ice, glorious rapture, impending doom, ghost that haunts you, thing you can not find, drawn to unknown powers, stumbling and unsure, among dark hordes I stand alone, I come.

Mystery and fate, fearless abandon, onward I go, relentless and driven, forever I be, I am because I am, terrible darkness brilliant and shining, iron willed, magnificent beast, strong yet weak, untold wonder, I come.

Lustful and wanting, giving and taking, raging against the dark, blinding light tis I, battlerage to the wicked, treading where no one dares, losing myself in the vast void, I am the path, onward I drive, against all odds, I come.

Downward frenzy, spiraling upward, unrelenting force of nature, cutting with words, I need a sign, calling on spirits, dream warrior, I enter through thought, sweet poison, untamed desire, I come.

I am the darkest light, unstoppable specter of things to come, the memory of the future, the past awakened, bringing power and chaotic glory, Wild with the fever of mysteries, I come.

Into freezing fire, fierce and unyielding I go, unbendable steel, I cut through the night, riding the storm, dark churning clouds before me, dancing sky fire, I come.

Hildolfr Draugadrottin, aka GhostGarden

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Excellent scansion, rhythm relentless; i like.

Greetings... Thanks, I appreciate your thoughts on it! For some reason I have always loved the word relentless, so its an honor having it used to describe my poem.

 

Have a great day!

Hildolfr 

I give all the credit to Odin. Thanks for your thoughts!

                            Hildolfr

Very nice! Thanks for sharing with us...

You are most welcome, and thanks for the complement!

                             Hildolfr

that was awsome . and so like what im about this minuite in time

Thanks, its what I'm about most of the time, but I don't know if thats a good thing lol.

Take Care!

Hildolfr

Very well done! 



http://www.paganspace.net/group/thedeadpoetssociety?
Here is a group on Paganspace for poetry, writing, music, visuals,ect. would love to have you join us!

Thanks, and I appreciate the invite to your group, I will check it out!

 

 

Have a beautiful  evening!

Hildolfr

Very nice.

BB~Raven

Thanks Raven!

Hildolfr

Thanks Raven!

Hildolfr

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