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Falling spinning madness, into the depths, drowning in the deep, beautiful fury, throughout time and space I fly, rolling thunder, flashing light, I come.

Ever knowing, ever not, into the light of the dark, far from the path I stray, mindless madman, wise and knowing, sky fire for friend, far away yet close by, I come.

Burning with fire, cold as ice, glorious rapture, impending doom, ghost that haunts you, thing you can not find, drawn to unknown powers, stumbling and unsure, among dark hordes I stand alone, I come.

Mystery and fate, fearless abandon, onward I go, relentless and driven, forever I be, I am because I am, terrible darkness brilliant and shining, iron willed, magnificent beast, strong yet weak, untold wonder, I come.

Lustful and wanting, giving and taking, raging against the dark, blinding light tis I, battlerage to the wicked, treading where no one dares, losing myself in the vast void, I am the path, onward I drive, against all odds, I come.

Downward frenzy, spiraling upward, unrelenting force of nature, cutting with words, I need a sign, calling on spirits, dream warrior, I enter through thought, sweet poison, untamed desire, I come.

I am the darkest light, unstoppable specter of things to come, the memory of the future, the past awakened, bringing power and chaotic glory, Wild with the fever of mysteries, I come.

Into freezing fire, fierce and unyielding I go, unbendable steel, I cut through the night, riding the storm, dark churning clouds before me, dancing sky fire, I come.

Hildolfr Draugadrottin, aka GhostGarden

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Excellent scansion, rhythm relentless; i like.

Greetings... Thanks, I appreciate your thoughts on it! For some reason I have always loved the word relentless, so its an honor having it used to describe my poem.


Have a great day!


I give all the credit to Odin. Thanks for your thoughts!


Very nice! Thanks for sharing with us...

You are most welcome, and thanks for the complement!


that was awsome . and so like what im about this minuite in time

Thanks, its what I'm about most of the time, but I don't know if thats a good thing lol.

Take Care!


Very well done!
Here is a group on Paganspace for poetry, writing, music, visuals,ect. would love to have you join us!

Thanks, and I appreciate the invite to your group, I will check it out!



Have a beautiful  evening!


Very nice.


Thanks Raven!


Thanks Raven!



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